Published April 8, 2005
Hello this is me
I am myself
Nobody else Just myself
There is no one like me
I am my own person
Just another body but special
For I am me
And this is real
And I am my own person
~Ude Dude~
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
141,367 Literary Works • 674,383 Reviews
It's really very bland. For one thing, you make statements but don't back them up.
Your poetry will develop the more you read other peoeple's works. Critique will help you a lot and the more you write, the easier it will come. I suggest reading around for now and observing other poets.
Umm... it's not terrible, but it's not really one to be proud of. It's clear that it's your first, and with time you will improve.
Do I need to start another chant? ok fair enough, WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE!
Yeah! I like this! Go you and write more!
~Lollipop~